As you walked?

You walk in the plank 
with no visible gut
and goal.

You caress all
with a gloom
caress none with the
same gloom.

You look around 
to grab the woods piercing you
with presage titles.

You pass into
 a hopeless hope
jumping from seeking tons
to rages of tranquility
‘waiting for Godot’.
Vladimir and Estragon path differs.
Yours turns a good fortune
your sudden stand of severe serenity stuns stiles.

Now,
you wail from inner harmony
you freeze in elongated ecstasy
the bliss washes away your relic
you bounce in felicitation.

With full gut,
You walk past those piercing woods
 to pick up your happiness.

Comments

chibuikem said…
Dear mrs bunmi i love your poem keep it up.by chibuikem
chibuikem said…
ma i totally loved it i wish i was the one who even wrote it
chibuikem said…
That poem was awesome to the extend i fell in love with it
Olubunmi Fatoba said…
You can write it better,dear Chibuikem.
Unknown said…
.....You walk pass the piercing wood and pick up your happiness. Great work!
Olubunmi Fatoba said…
This is in reference to a question asked on this piece which will vividly clarify the piece.

"Waiting for Godot" is a classical text classified as one of 18th century literary text.
Vladimir and Estragon are characters who waited so long for an abstract character.

The use of classical allusion as used in this text, "As You walked?' reveals the longings of the personae, the fortunes attained unlike the characters in the other text.

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